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September 12, 2005
"Riding A Bike, A Needle In A Haystack"
Riding a bike is a needle in a haystack. I thought big bad wolf and the three little pigs. I did not believe the little engine that could. The process was walking through a maze with no end.
My uncle a teacher in a classroom. I used all of my strength Moses crossing the red sea. I tried my best Boxer hit in a boxing ring. My hopes Prince in search of Cinderella. My practice led to Hurricane Katrina.
I got back on the bike survivors of 9/11. My uncle let got of the bike jumping on a trampoline. I didn't stop going fear factor champion.
Posted by lcisperez at September 12, 2005 11:19 PM
Comments
Hey Yasmin,
I think we wrote about the same topic (if I'm getting the metaphors in yours correct!).
I thoroughly enjoyed the way you managed to keep it to the point. It makes it flow well and the images easy to follow.
Nanette Savides
Posted by: Nanette Savides at September 14, 2005 06:13 PM