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November 08, 2005
S L A M M E D ...
Trapped between the walls he manages to impress his enemies
Except from his heart there is no place for his memories
ALL day long the man fights to survive his community
Cops hate him, stabbs him with stares of scrutiny
Harder to breath, as hatred and frustration fill his veins!!!
Us and them, what is the difference in life of games
See the sun and one day your time will come.
The opportunity that you slammed away will come back...
Posted by lcisbold at November 8, 2005 09:53 PM
Comments
Zaya--What an amazing work of art this is! Truly incredible. I love how you make every word powerful and yet you still were able to start every sentence with a letter that ended up making "Teach us" at the end. How moving! I am blown away. My favorite line is your last: "See the sun and one day your time will come. The opportunity that you slammed away will come back.." Tremendous.
Posted by: Christina at November 9, 2005 11:43 PM